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[Kelly Gang] Drabble #4

  • Mar. 30th, 2004 at 5:02 AM
CAREY constellations
Have been in a jag of "don't wanna do annnnnnnything" for the last week or so. Am slowly working back to a point where I'm not going to stab people/things with vitrolic hatred. Apparently this is a good thing. Personally, I just think it has a lot to do with being home for a bit once more.

For gidjaMs Gidj... because outlaw!slash. Kinda.




~


‘Do you miss ‘em?’

Joe blinked lazily against the damp smog of the fire that Dan had started, turned his head to peer, narrow-eyed and curious, through its plumes at Ned. Seated beside him, backside against the dust and clutter of the bush floor, Ned seemed oblivious to Joe’s stare, his own focused upon the smatter of flames that barely warmed them.

‘Who?’ Joe asked, coughed a little against the smoke as it touched his throat in choking waves of tinder scent.

‘Your sisters.’

He pursed his lips, scowled bitterly at the fire. ‘No.’ he said, then: ‘Just little Ellen. Don’t miss the others with their snivelling about how I’m bloody useless.’ His scowl became a thoughtful frown and he risked a glance towards Ned. ‘You?’ he asked.

Ned shook his head, his eyes wide with distance, his mouth twisted into the vague semblance of a smile. ‘Nah.’ He said. ‘Not really. Girls are alright – except…’

‘They’re not.’

‘Aye.’ Ned grinned, threw it casually in Joe’s direction, and it was as though he could no longer taste the bittersweet smog at the back of his throat, no longer feel the sting against his eyes for the brilliance of the smile…

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[info]gidja wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2004 08:31 am (UTC)
Awlllllll, you do seem to have hit a sappy streak with these one.

I keep waiting for someone to betray someone or for it to all end in tears and recriminations but happily I am waiting in vain it seems :)
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2004 12:59 am (UTC)
Heh. I can't make 'em bicker/betray one another. It's... disturbing, I know, because there is the potential, but... I actually quite like 'em. Being hormonal kinda sucks, I think.
[info]gidja wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2004 02:23 am (UTC)
Maybe its just a counter balance to the other drabble series you currently have running. You know, one nasty, one sappy...

I often end up working liek that with two very difft stories in tandem then you can pick which ever one to work one according to ya mood.
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2004 02:28 am (UTC)
It's possible. The thing is that there is such a huge potential for betrayal, but because they didn't in real life, my brain's going "nu-uh... likes teh pretties..." and is refusing to make 'em slug it out in the dust.

Although...
[info]gidja wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2004 02:30 am (UTC)
NO.
No, althoughs...
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2004 02:35 am (UTC)
(*grins*)

Sounds like a challenge, to me...
[info]gidja wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2004 02:37 am (UTC)
No.
No its not a challenge.
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2004 02:50 am (UTC)
Bwah.
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