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[Kelly Gang] Drabble #1

  • Mar. 1st, 2004 at 7:44 PM
CAREY constellations
Strictly speaking, I don't think this would qualify as a drabble. It's 200 words long, so I guess it would be either a drablet, or a double-drabble... but I'm not sure what to term it, and this is my journal, after all, so I figure that it's pretty darned okay if I label it as a drabble and whack it away where very few venture... *bwah*ahahahahaha... (*coughs*) Where was I?!? Oh. Yeah. Enjoying my first night off in almost a week. Righty-oh, then; back to the slash and nachos I trundle...




~

Watching Joe cosy on up to Ned was, Aaron thought as he shifted against the low burning weight of jealous hatred, like observing the snuffling dance of a mare in heat enticing a stallion to mount her. There was nothing obvious about the glances that Joe sent Ned’s way, nor in the laughing comments that passed between them – but Aaron knew.

He knew precisely what his mate were up to; had known all along and hated that it were Ned that Joe had chosen instead of his boyhood pal.

Watching them, Aaron thought with rancour, were like having his teeth pulled – reminded him of the time when his Da had slammed the outhouse door with a string tied to the handle on one end and the other wrapped about his loose milk tooth. The pain had sliced through him with lingering bitterness, and he’d thought he were going to die… but he hadn’t. He’d lived, instead, to grow a few years and lose more teeth the same way, enough for him to compare the agony that each caused him to that which he felt watching Joe touch his hand to Ned’s shoulder.

Enough to remind him that Joe weren’t his…

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[info]gidja wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 03:47 am (UTC)
Ah-ha! 19th centurey Australia.
Me likes :)

Outlaws and heroes and men in outlaw clothing *g*

Outlaw!slash! *giggles*
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 07:33 am (UTC)
Ah-ha, indeed!!! It's taken me a while to get it sounding right in my own head, y'know, but I think I'm there now. Which helps. Kinda.

Outlaw!slash... heh...
[info]gidja wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 08:33 am (UTC)
*rubs hands together* gimme, gimme, gimme.

See Jui *does* have his uses. if he hadn't have made you sit through the movie...
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 10:06 am (UTC)
(*pouts*) Jui doesn't have his uses. He is a mean, mean man who irritates my delicate sensibilities by making me sit through movies that then proceed to give me freaky someone-standing-over-me-whilst-I-try-to-sleep nightmares.

On the other hand...

Outlaw!slash.

Good-oh.
[info]gidja wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 10:13 am (UTC)
Indeed.

Okay semi-useful.
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 10:19 am (UTC)
Sounds a fair compromise.

I'm sure he'll be very flattered (*cackles*)
[info]gidja wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 10:24 am (UTC)
*snorts*
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 10:28 am (UTC)
Well, he has a low confidence thing when it comes to things like that [something about having lived with me for too long...], so I'm sure he'll be honoured when I tell him that you think he's at least vaguely useful for appeasing teh gods of outlaw!slash...

(*smiles sweetly*)
[info]gidja wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 10:31 am (UTC)
*lol* Yeah you have your uses for inspiring slash.

I can see his facial expression from here.
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 10:39 am (UTC)
Personally, I'm just constantly surprised that he hasn't managed to smother me in my sleep yet for tormenting him with images of Certain People getting off on images of Other Certain People... unless he's just biding his time, of course. I sometimes wonder. He can be devious when he wants to be.

Heh. Yeah. The horrified expression is a beaut.
[info]gidja wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 10:55 am (UTC)
He should just think himself jolly lucky that *he's* not being paired up with someone.
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 11:31 am (UTC)
See... this is the thing.

I have a notebook in which, the moment someone annoys me... I slash 'em with someone else. Dude, I've slashed the postman with the boy in the corner shop before now. I ain't picky. So, yes, there is indeed Jui-slash in the world... just, y'know, securely secreted away where he can't actively get at it.

And yes, I guard my notebook well (*nodsnods*)
[info]gidja wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 12:10 pm (UTC)
Always good to have something in reserve as a bargaining tool.
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 12:43 pm (UTC)
(*smiles sweetly*) Being the youngest and the only girl during my most formative years taught me the joys of deviousness, nefariousness and down-and-out sneakiness when it comes to ensuring that I get my own way over certain matters. I found at a very young age, that it helped to ensure my very survival amidst the scrummage of my cousins and brothers, if I had something to blackmail bargain with...
[info]gidja wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 01:12 pm (UTC)
You certainly learnt well *g*
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