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[SDB] Challenge Drabble #45

  • Mar. 1st, 2004 at 1:35 PM
CAREY constellations
Written for a challenge suggested by [info]sweetchacha in the [info]boybanddrabbles community...



"Ice."
~

The coldness seeps through Chris’ veins as he lies back against the floor, stares blankly up the ceiling of his kitchen, contemplates wriggling his toes – just to prove that he can – but decides, in the end, that it’s too much effort. He is weary; more tired than he can remember having been in years, and his eyelids are heavy, weighted down with thought and the implication of moving.

He knows he should.

Finds that he doesn’t want to, is content to simply lie there whilst he feels JC’s new album slowly fill his blood with the icy chill of regret…

Comments

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[info]clumsygyrl wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2004 12:39 pm (UTC)
ouchie. *pets chris*
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 07:31 am (UTC)
Heh. I tried not to be cruel, but...
[info]clumsygyrl wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 01:59 pm (UTC)
sometimes it's too easy... heh.
[info]paperdollkisses wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2004 10:36 pm (UTC)
ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhh. I like that. A lot.
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 07:31 am (UTC)
(*blushes*) Thanks; glad you liked it.
[info]epicflailer wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 01:34 am (UTC)
*pets chris*

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. dude i can't believe i haven't had enough time lately to read, and dammit, i've missed your writing! *snugs*
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 07:32 am (UTC)
(*snugs back*) Dude, thanks... although I've not been writing that much, 'cause, y'know, work and stuff.
[info]_somebrowngirl wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2004 09:47 pm (UTC)
That was lovely-- very descriptive and flowy (for lack of a better word... forgive me). You do a great job at setting the scene and putting the reader in the moment. And you manage to do a lot with so little. You put a lot into those 100 words.

I hope that made sense. :-D

Long story short: Really really good.
[info]ellie_fic wrote:
Mar. 3rd, 2004 10:09 pm (UTC)
(*blushes*) Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it - and, y'know, I'm quite partial to the word "flowy" (*grins*)
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